I have now read the updated version of this book and have changed the star rating. The author has taken all comments on her book seriously and the language issues are gone. Now that I know that this is the first part of the story, I read it differently and I believe that the author has re-written this quite a bit. Anyway, the book is really enjoyable now. The ending makes you look forward to the second instalment with the author cleverly dangling bits and pieces of the puzzle in front of the reader but withholding the answers. I will definitely buy the second part and look forward to reading it!